Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:28 am Post subject:
holder Of Light
Subject description: defence tower
Name:Holder Of Light
Weapon:Light Beam
Cost:1400
Needed To Get It:Air Tech Center
Bio:the holder of light is the main defence building for the H.A. it uses a very high tech sun ray gathering weapon that lets out a constant beam of light at its enemys burning them, this weapon can be used against ground and air units.
1. Fix your grammar. "Needed to get it", I believe you mean "Prerequisite". Also, AFAIK, "Bio" is about a human person only, and coz it's a statue, use rather "info" or something...
2. The frames and the lines of the model are quite too easily seen. It needs more work, to blend it in. Also I believe it's rather weak, break the leg, and the whole weapon falls down... _________________ QUICK_EDIT
just work to develop it further. Like Yurio07 said the legs need to me more believable. as a support.
you could have the dress flow downwards. and its going to need some detail. so it doesnt look silly. Look up Statues. google.
also think about adding animation. Like do the wings flap as it fires. I mean something interesting beyond just the orb glowing. _________________ Delirium.. QUICK_EDIT
well there isint much i can do as an ani cause its weapon has a realy high rof. but i will detail it more _________________ Global Genocide Website QUICK_EDIT
i edited the original one a little bit and then i came up with an idea for a new way the statue is postioned, so i wanted to know which you guys thought was better, 1 or 2?
no one? wow...
well i made the dissision to use number 1, i tilted the head down and it made it look 10 times better. _________________ Global Genocide Website QUICK_EDIT
I like the stand up model, but the textures are sucks.
I have some suggestion and a picture in my head.
Make the body a ligher shiny color. And make it shine(silver stars popup sometimes in a activate anim). And add some muscle texture.
And the red thing on the top should have a glowing animition.
I have no ides about the bottom, but the texutre sucks there to. Add a alot of stuff.
I hope you like the ides. It may be hard you also learn.
And download 3ds max 8 from torrent using crack. It coast f*cking $3,000, who have that money? QUICK_EDIT
1) Standing with tilted head is more cooler in my opinion. Nice darker aspect.
2) Texture sucks and needs work.
3) Add something on the base! It's plain.
4) The feet needs work. _________________ QUICK_EDIT
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:43 pm Post subject:
-Ux2- wrote:
i edited the original one a little bit and then i came up with an idea for a new way the statue is postioned, so i wanted to know which you guys thought was better, 1 or 2?
how about a variant in which it is positioned with the sphere floating above its stretched out hands? _________________ Please, read the signature rules of the forum. QUICK_EDIT
Everyone complaining about the texture... this thing doesn't even have one...
I think this defense should rotate and use an ActiveAnim of the ball glowing. A statue facing only one direction and shooting in all of them would be stupid. _________________ QUICK_EDIT
This is the last mod I was expecting to see an update on any time soon. But yeah you've definitely improved, looks much better. Though I'm not going to pass final judgment until I see a textured version. QUICK_EDIT
while wow it is a retty good model, much improvement since. although I really liked the version with the angel. it was unique, while this sorta goes back down to some generic defense tower.
btw Aro, not everything in 3d NEEDS texture... _________________ Delirium.. QUICK_EDIT
WTF? Mod status: Zombie?!?! It's been dead/inactive since before I arrived and now it gets updates
It's all good! _________________ Yes, work on MV continues. It is not forgotten. QUICK_EDIT
yeah, this mod is dead. I'm just not into it anymore. making 3d models is still kinda fun every once and a while. and i had insomnia tonight. so i made an update to this sucker.
OK so how this thing works is the angel hovers over the machine, those Grey brackets that connect into a red circle in the middle of the machine rotates around.
and yeah. to get technical. those shiny crystals and gizmos in shining in the machine collect light.
to fire it, the crystals gather light and get collected by the gizmos, focused through the red circle, shot up into the angel, and out of the sphere the angel holds.
remember the good old days when we would actually stay on topic and judge the creations? i miss those days... _________________ Global Genocide Website QUICK_EDIT
It's a lot better then previous ones!
But why is the angel's shadow connected to the base?
And does it have a flying animation or so? Or does it stand still? QUICK_EDIT
remember the good old days when we would actually stay on topic and judge the creations? i miss those days...
So true. Though to be fair, you did even say above that the project is dead, yet you updated it anyway, you should expect questions about whats going on. Last edited by Aro on Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:12 pm; edited 1 time in total QUICK_EDIT
It's a lot better then previous ones!
But why is the angel's shadow connected to the base?
And does it have a flying animation or so? Or does it stand still?
Thank you for actually criticizing the model!
ok, the shadow is connected to the base because the tip of the wing shadow reaches the base shadow. idk how, but it does.
and kinda on the flying animation. now im about to get scientific so bare with me. the base thing has magnetic technology built in that causes the angel to hover. it bobs a little up and down as an animation.
the angel is just a statue that doesn't actually move its limbs or wings. the reason for it is to give the troops a sense of protection. like a guardian angel. it keeps them confident. _________________ Global Genocide Website QUICK_EDIT
remember the good old days when we would actually stay on topic and judge the creations? i miss those days...
So true. Though to be fair, you did even say above that the project is dead, yet you updated it anyway, you should expect questions about whats going on.
eh, true. but like you said, i said the mod is dead. and to add to that i said i had insomnia(which i did, was up till 4 in the frickin morning!) so i decided to do something constructive and have a go at 3d modeling. felt good to go back.
and yes Fool. it does kinda look like that _________________ Global Genocide Website QUICK_EDIT
You really love this model don't you? It is a damn good defense structure though. _________________ Comcast: Yo dawg we herd yo were downloading, so we put fail in yo modem so yo cant download while yo failin! QUICK_EDIT
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